BbHopelessRomantic

hayy. enxia na natatagalan update ko pero promise pag nag update ako ilang chapters na agad naging busy lang kasi now

MadamWriting_28

Feedback here! 
          
          Good news muna, I love the plotting. It's interesting. Maaksyon po siya. Ang problem lang po ay ang paggamit ng punctuation marks. May maling spelling din. But all in all, Good job!!!

MadamWriting_28

@MadamWriting_28 sa ilang chapters mo po. Pero typographical errors lang po yan. 
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BbHopelessRomantic

@MadamWriting_28 saan po banda mam? kung ok lang po?
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francinee04

HI! Pretty president ng gc
          
          Feedback: 
          
          So your story was 'Vengeance ' that all about revenge or something. It's interesting, but it still on going hope you will notice the wrong grammars tagalog/English. So that your aware, and also don't be shy to ask something sa gc. Tuturuan po nila kayo :) 
          
          Later i will read it, tatapusin ko sya. And i know maganda to. Genre pa lang eh, just keep writing and pursue your dreams :)

francinee04

@francinee04 konti lang naman bb :)
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