Pastel

hi. i just read your book a little. i was drawn to it for a specific reason, being i was concerned about the subject of it. 
          
          i know this isn’t your intent, but you’re clearly young and because of that you don’t know that well what you’re doing, but you’re romanticising rape and abuse. which is bad. you’re writing this story and wanting us, the readers, to ship our two main characters, yet there are rapey and abusive undertones to their relationship. that makes it seem like it’s okay to have that kind of relationship in real life, and it’s not. 
          
          i don’t have a problem with kinky shit, kinky shit is fine, but it has to be consensual kinky shit. and not physically, verbally or emotionally abusive too. 
          
          and, just a disclaimer: this is nothing against you as a person. i know you see a lot of fics like this online and you think they’re a great idea to write, but they’re not. you’re young and impressionable and i don’t want you to get a mindset that pushes the ideologies of these types of fics. they’re not good. 
          
          best regards.