BeastZex
I actually meant to ask this a while ago but is there too much dialogue? Also how can I make the story flow better this whole time i’ve been being a pantser should I switch to a plotter?
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Happy Halloween! I’ve released a small mini chapter to celebrate the holiday I hope everyone enjoys it!
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Chapter 11 has been released and I’m glad I can stay on my once a week chapter schedule! This chapter brings along a question I have is this chapter too dialogue heavy if so tell me!
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I have released chapter 9! I’m on a roll chapter 10 should be coming next week hopefully. Time to take a break
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Chapter 7 and Chapter 8 have both been uploaded!
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sorry for not posting a chapter last week I do want to atleast keep a chapter a week basis even though I think that is still bad. Anyways I thank people for their support of this series and Chapter 6 (Idk if that is right) Is releasing in 10 minutes! Thanks Again!
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@PaperPumpkin2 Thank you I hope you are doing well yourself! I forgot to post the next chapter and am about to actually do it this time plus the next one so I hope you will have fun reading both of them.
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I somehow forgot to mention that the whole reason I didn’t post last week was because of Hurricane Helene! My power has been out ever since she hit and what I really wanted to do was drop 2 chapters on the same day but as you can see it has fully stalled my progress and Chapter 7 will most likely be released Next week depending on my power. Thanks yet again for all the support!
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I have published Chapter 6 and would’ve got it out last week as that’s when I finished the chapter but I forgot to publish it. I hope you enjoy this chapter even though it’s a flashback thank you for reading!
PaperPumpkin2
I've been meaning to ask you something. What is it about your story that you love? And a little more specially, what do you want your readers to love about your story? Like when Craterfield is edited and finished and it has millions of fans, what do you want people to remember it for?
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@PaperPumpkin2 Alright thank you for all you do by the way! I’m also glad that your favorite character is Vulcan of course I can’t choose favorites I love them all
PaperPumpkin2
@BeastZex No worries =) Likewise, if I don't respond or read the latest post on Craterfield it's because I either didn't see the notification or I'm offline. Yeah, characters are often the best part of stories. So far, Vulcan is my favorite.
BeastZex
I'm so sorry that Ive been late to reply for some reason I got no notification but thank you for this question. What I love about my story is my characters. I haven’t been with them long but I really love Lucius, Vulcan, and Karisa. And that’s what I really want them to remember from it is the characters and their development throughout the story.
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Chapter 5 has released and you’ll find it quite shorter than the other ones. I wonder if is it better to have these short chapters or is it better to have longer chapters let me know!
PaperPumpkin2
@BeastZex ofc =) There's a lot that goes into writing a story, so if there's anything specific you want to know, feel free to ask
BeastZex
@PaperPumpkin2 Ah I see I will go back to the longer chapters at Chapter 7 as Chapter 6 I mostly want to contain the flashback. Yet again I thank you for all this wonderful advice especially the slow down one!
PaperPumpkin2
@BeastZex I'm good with both, though I've noticed most stories on Wattpad tend to be about 5 to 12 minutes of reading time per chapter. It also depends on the age range you want your story to reach. Generally the younger the audience, the shorter the chapters. I'm old (28) so I guess that's why I don't mind long chapters
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Chapter 4 is finally released! I’m sorry for the wait ! (Feedback is still very much appreciated!)