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Hey author plz come back  post new part 

missing you

No matter what others say, it's fine to have an opinion but I want to tell you , you are doing fine and you write good too 

Hii writer 
          Really like ur book  plot “ mafia forbidden bride” will definitely read it soon
          Can i get ur book insta id ?
          Thank u

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Where are you author!!

I mean if we open the summary and see tag lines abusive husband comes first 
          I was plotted to be dark romance but turned out to be abusive life

4 th part 
          Their relationship is nothing but just him doing that thing with her when he wants and behaves cold when he wants and she like desperate revolving near his toes his doing that again and giving cold shoulder and again satisfying his needs 
          Now she is even shared to talk to him 
          Tell me a moment where they talked peacefully like a couple? 
          No it's never happened because in his mind she is just a slut for satisfying his needs 
          I just doesn't want a kid between them no, not like this when they are not settled? 
          I want her to stand for her atleast one time 
          And him understanding he atleast once ( it won't happen I think)
          But tell me if a child comes into their life it will just remain that child a childhood trauma that baby's father doesn't do anything except shout at baby's mother and doing it with her and act like nothing happened 
          Seriously I am done with it I will be soo happy if there is actually no baby and slowly jk changes and they settle in first before child 
          
          Author sorry if I offended you by my words but this is frustration after reading all the chapters until now 
          
          But you really have skills in there ...
          I just wanna support you and be the one who tells you mistakes so together we grow 
          U will not know some things until it's said by someone right?
          
          And author for your writing skills and story plot of dark romance for your avg 13.8 k views you would easily get 800-1000 votes but some where I started feeling that dark romance become an abusive romance 
          
          Don't take anything personal 
          Please consider my opinion

3rd part 
          Any time FL wants to talk to him she feels scared what type of marriage relationship is this and they fell like everything is fine?
          Bro if it's a NO it's a NO even if it your husband it is rape*
          And when ever he is angry due to other reasons or due to her he calls her names too....
          And coming forward ⏩ ⏩ ⏩ 
          He doesn't cares and does it with her during her periods 
          It's not okay it's literally like martial rape 
          U can't normalise it saying he was angery 
          All I fell is her felling and priorities and consent is not important for him either he cares 
          Anything happens she cries he gives her punishment which is so out of reason 
          Fucking doesn't comes under punishment it comes under rape if what I am saying is wrong then what suga made his men to do to her is also not wrong its just punishment right it's not new to her 
          This fact doesn't change because he is her HUSBAND 
          And for all this he never apologize 
          U know when she went to coma low key I was happy because atleast then he doesn't treat he like shit
          But she wakes up again, and again story repeats 
          He doesn't care about her 
          Even after sleeping with her he behaves cold like he is just using her for his needs of course he is doing that only.. if he goes out and does it with sluts he image would ruin so he does that with her and take all his anger out on her 
          Now atlast she's pregnant 
          I was lill Happy but but see how many holes they have in their relationship 
          

2nd part
          He..e I mean she was crying when he touched her or kissed her that is actual she said NO but he doesn't care about her feelings 
          And hands off for the point that he will not even regret it bro??!?! WTF 
          I don't understand what's wrong with for going and FL is soo stupid that she won't even ask him or try to settle with him like in one point she doesn't have self respect 
          In which era are we living in the 1830s or what 
          He doesn't allow her to do her dream 
          Ok ok I still digest it It's wrong if others touch her with her consent he burden them what Abt him bro he literally was trying to force her in name of punishments 
          Spanking is alright we have kinks just until it's comfortable... She was crying and even begging for stop he Doesn't CARE 
          then he makes her stand in the rain for entire night but FL won't even ask why ? I am soo done here just because he carried her into room it's normalised and forgot by FL 
          And that topic won't even come up again both will for get and keep going this is physical abuse
          And she cursed him it's wrong I accept but what Abt him he literally had no respect for her or values her even a little and even again punish her for cursing 
          She is soo sacred of him even to call him for breakfast 
          And I think things are not good in terms of marriage for them 
          The shit others do with him like going into his room and office 
          But she cannot 
          I thought the character of ML in this story is cold and rude so he is like that 
          But he is soft near his mom 
          Near his father ok accepted even near his brother ok it's good he is nice even with Emma