Venus1102

Hi dear, I am a new writer here. Have recently published few chapters of my ongoing web novel which is about slow burn romance. I would really appreciate if you can read and see if it is intriguing to you or not. Feedback means a lot to me.
          
          Title : Second Place Was Never Mine
          Author : Ms. Venus 
          
          Link : https://www.wattpad.com/story/410485170?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Venus2911304

Venus1102

@Bebel2026 Definitely . People now a days are not bothered to even reply in their super busy life. I am really glad atleast you took time and responded to my messages. Really appreciate!!……….And don’t worry about your English, it’s pretty understandable  . Have a wonderful day !!
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Bebel2026

@Venus1102 Yeah you got me! Oh, and also when you feel like it's really important a look(clothes) or a landscape, house and etc, put the images too!
            Thanks fro replaying.
            Sorry for my english, it's not soo good because I'm from Brazil ...
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Venus1102

@Bebel2026 Hey, thanks for the tip dear, I will make a note of it and definitely add them and it does make sense for readers, they can better feel the emotions when they have visuals of main characters.
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