What an incredible fan-fiction around the world of Harry Potter ! I am a big fan of
this amazing saga and i found that your story is a compelling tale ! Firstly, I found that the end was great that the characters return into their period because it doesn’t allocate the future of the generation after the marauders. I also found that your fan-fiction is a poignant chronicle including the end when Harry find out that it was from the very beggining his parents. The fact that Harry met for the first time his parents is very touching. Secondly, I love reading this story because you kept the suspense going throughout the chapters. That’s why your fan-fiction is a compulsive reading !
Then, I love the fact that you don’t change the true story.
However, I have constructive criticism for you. I think that the story was too short
and as someone who loves details, I found that there weren’t enough of them. And, I would have preferred that the reunion between Harry and the marauders must be longer. I also notice that it was damage that the marauders take false names because it was frustrating that Harry and his friends (except Hermione) do not know their true identities.
In any case, keep writing the way you do, because it’s fantastic !
