Becktinker21

I hope you're all enjoying the revamped Pinocchio having a sister story. It's set in the original story, but something happened differently; The talking Cricket and Candlewick weren't killed so they could aid Pinocchio in his teaching his new sister, and The Fire Eater acts more like Stromboli from the disney version and Pinocchio stole the five coins from him, the Eugene is a bully, the Fox and Cat have been replaced by two new animal villains since by the end of the original story they were left poor, lame, and blind. Some of the dark themes are still intact, but have been altered to be more lighthearted since this is a story about a little girl learning from the struggles of her older brother. When I'm done with this story, I'm gonna start working on my Oz story about Dorothy being the ruler of OZ, and a sequel to my Disney Pinocchio Daughter story, where Annabelle is adjusting to life as a real girl. If you enjoy my stories, I hope you'll leave feedback.

tyhtkmk25mprivaterel

Well can you make it like he turned back into a puppet and a real boy like hoe Annabelle can please by the way love your story’s
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Becktinker21

@tyhtkmk25mprivaterel No. He's going to stay a real boy. Please stop asking this.
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tyhtkmk25mprivaterel

Will Pinocchio turn back into a puppet as well just for his sister 
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tyhtkmk25mprivaterel

Wow you are being mean to me I just thought of a story idea and you hate it wow

rberrios83

My boyfriend it’s not mean. Please respect his decisions 
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Becktinker21

@tyhtkmk25mprivaterel I'm not being mean to you, I just don't want to do that in my stories. I appricate the suggestion and that you like my stories, but you keep asking me to turn him back after I kindly declined. You don't keep asking.
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Becktinker21

I hope you're all enjoying the revamped Pinocchio having a sister story. It's set in the original story, but something happened differently; The talking Cricket and Candlewick weren't killed so they could aid Pinocchio in his teaching his new sister, and The Fire Eater acts more like Stromboli from the disney version and Pinocchio stole the five coins from him, the Eugene is a bully, the Fox and Cat have been replaced by two new animal villains since by the end of the original story they were left poor, lame, and blind. Some of the dark themes are still intact, but have been altered to be more lighthearted since this is a story about a little girl learning from the struggles of her older brother. When I'm done with this story, I'm gonna start working on my Oz story about Dorothy being the ruler of OZ, and a sequel to my Disney Pinocchio Daughter story, where Annabelle is adjusting to life as a real girl. If you enjoy my stories, I hope you'll leave feedback.

tyhtkmk25mprivaterel

Well can you make it like he turned back into a puppet and a real boy like hoe Annabelle can please by the way love your story’s
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Becktinker21

@tyhtkmk25mprivaterel No. He's going to stay a real boy. Please stop asking this.
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tyhtkmk25mprivaterel

Will Pinocchio turn back into a puppet as well just for his sister 
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Becktinker21

Hope you all enjoyed the new Annabelle chapter. This is  kind of a "What if" ending where Annabelle decided to continue being a puppet till she's fully ready to be human and brace her true self. Since she learned that being real isn't about what one looks like but who they are on the inside. So this way Annabelle can still be a real girl and turn back whenever she wishes. It's the magic in her heart that makes her real.