Becktinker21
I hope you all enjoyed chapter 13 of Pinocchia and the continuing adventures of pinocchio. This was a little dark. Even though my story is an alternate universe continuation of the book version I still try to keep the dark themes of the original story written by Collodi intact but not too scary. I want Geppetto to be the hero this time around instead of just being a supportive father/side character. Plus he didn't do much in the original story besides getting eaten by the giant shark/Dogfish. We'll see how this turns out. In the mean time I'll be working on chapter 9 of the stone Goblin shoe wearing princess. I can't wait to get back to working on her story.