Beckuh

@alittlemind there is a lot of writers on this website that don't get the recognition they deserve, and i don't have any talent writing I'm just good at criticism
          

*writer. And also, I believe that most of my favourite authors (Salinger, Dan Brown, King, Sachar) all got their works recognised because they're fantastic authors. I don't think someone with fabulous talent goes unnoticed, especially on a website like this. 

@alittlemind Just because they don't have a lot of reads docent mean they suck. i could be the best righter ever and you'll never know
          

No I just saw the number of reads and decided not to even enter into them. 

@alittlemind thats ok because i don't really write ... i just do it when I'm bored... so u read all my stories :0

Constructive criticism on how not to make typos? Well, I honestly don't care what you say about my story because it's done better than all of yours put together. 

           @alittlemind I was just giving some constructive critisism and maybe if you did some research before you wrote you would relize some mistakes you made plus, LAME ending js so im kinda done with ur story so i cant 'not read it' 

If you don't like my story don't read it. And on the chapter where you said that California and Long Beach were in the same country, yes, I know! It must have been a typo (or possibly low reading skills on your side). I mean COUNTY. And you don't have to be rude when commenting. 

@TaintedGhost yes plz... Just my user name

Do you want your name and stuff on the cover??