MyBalls0
Although the spelling mistakes and sometimes grammar mistakes as well, I see a very bright future for your writing. I think I would just work on more descriptive language. But short chapters are fun to read too.
MyBalls0
Of course! I was honestly just looking for a random fanfic to make fun of with my friends. At first I really thought your story would be shallow and that your character would be like a doll and all perfect. A pleasant surprise to see it be really good!
BeebriVlogs
@MyBalls0 honestly I was going to give up on that fic until you started commenting
BeebriVlogs
@MyBalls0 thank you so much!