Demigod_Shishi
Hi how are you
BeffyB8
Demigod_Shishi
No offense but Mr.Money is cliché. The story is interesting,but the plot is so,so. 'Ya know. This is actually a common plot. So to protect you from criticism I recommend you rap it up,but it's still good.
Demigod_Shishi
I was only mentioning this, it surprisingly is somewhat different. That is rather hard because of all the different plot twists to the same plot.
BeffyB8
You're entitled to your own opinion. I'm confident in my story and plot, I do plan to continue polishing and improving the story.
BeffyB8
I'm trying to find the perfect topic to write about ! Any suggestions?!?!
Demigod_Shishi
@BeffyB8 and they find old pictures of themselves and they finally remember the first time they met and all the good times they had and at the end they turn out to be immortal,too but they had just forgotten everything, expect their name. Then they go and find out who did it then, you decide!
Demigod_Shishi
@BeffyB8, how about a mortal who falls in love with the same person over and over again, just in a different lifetime.