Beiirss24

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Holy shit did wattpad update out of nowhere!?!?

Kiu_Orchid

@Beiirss24 RIGHT!?
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DevilSpitYum

Heyy thanks for adding my story to your lists!

DevilSpitYum

So glad your enjoying it! If you ever have any suggestions I’m open to hearing them ;)
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Beiirss24

Of course! It’s well written and has be laughing my ass off. Keep up the great work!!
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Beiirss24

I may not be in the fandom anymore but, may technoblade be at peace now. He was my favorite DSMP streamer and will always be. His streams helped me through dark times and i can never forget that. Heck, he helped a bunch of other through their problems unintentionally. Now, he has left his mortal life to pursue his true role. The blood god. 
          
          All jokes aside, may Alex rest in peace and the words of Technoblade live in our hearts. 
          
          TECHNOBLADE NEVER DIES!!!

Beiirss24

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            FUCK CANCER!!!!!
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Beiirss24

@Mereeples - 
          
          I really am enjoying it. Your writing style is neat and organized. They storyline may be based on the show, but the way you add your plot into the story makes it seem like it should be there and not a loose end that makes no sense. I like how the reader is realistic with actual human reactions, even if they are a bit funny. The way you write dramatic scene or sad scene are amazing and realistic. It gives me the feeling like I’m in that scene feeling what she’s feeling, thinking what she’s thinking. I encourage you to not stop here and to keep improving your gift of writing, because you have potential. Keep up the good work!

QUEENofBAVARIA

 Hello, I feel flattered that my fanfic has got you on the edge of your seat and is a bit of a heart throb. Would you tell me what you think of my story, I'd love to know. I'd appreciate feedback, be it good or bad, it helps my writing.
          
          ~QUEENofBAVARIA

QUEENofBAVARIA

@QUEENofBAVARIA Thank you, this means so much to me, truly. I really appreciate this, it warms my heart, thank you.
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Beiirss24

@QUEENofBAVARIA, hello! I would gladly give you my feed back. To start, i have read over 2,000 stories on wattpad (i have a life, I swear) and all of them have a different writing style. While reading, i found out other people have a gift for writing or more experience in writing. Thats when i made those categories. Your book is one of those rare types of books that hooked me from the start. Your gammer is neat and your wording is clear and solid. Your detailing during drama scenes allows the reader to know and feel exactly what the character feels. The plot is well thought out and we can tell you’re putting effort into this story. I don’t have any bad reviews but that doesn’t mean you don’t have room to improve. All i have to say left is keep up the great work. Have a great day.
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