Shame on me for keeping you posted on your own message board. If you have time to read, i hope you'll consider mine and give it a try. I'll be overwhelm if you give me honest feedbacks. :) I will also support your writing journey in exchange to your supports. Thank you so much.
Here it is:
https://www.wattpad.com/story/339547790
Hey, I checked out your story and voted. The concept is very interesting, just needs a bit more description and a little proofreading. Mind checking out my story?