Belladeen

@AshThePoet Your welcome. Your poems are really good. They seem to have a lot of emotion and depth to me.That I find interesting. Can't wait to read it.

@maidenjapan Thank you. Can I show you a peice of work I did, it is a poem I did 2 yrs ago.vit is based on identity. Hope it's good.
          
          Women of the future:
          "I am like a tree
          I am the discussions and fighter of my father
          I am the mirror reflection of a dream and nightmare
          
          I am all I see...
          Rolling waves coming in at the shoreline 
          Emotions on people's faces when I walk by
          People traversing down the ski hills in winter
          
          I am all I hear...
          Clarinet and piano playing in harmony to the songs 
          My coach saying 'you can do it'
          The puffing of my dog when I have walked it
          
          I am all I feel and taste...
          The mouth-watering taste of desert my mum gives me
          The softness of my toys and quilts when I sleep
          The pain I get when a family member dies
          
          I am all I remember...
          Going to hospital for check ups on my health
          My comfort with putting up with boys
          The sadness I get when a principal leaves
          
          I am all I think...
          Mean as a grizzly bear
          Lonely as a wolf
          Quiet as mouse
          
          I am like a horse that is slow
          But one day I'll be fast as lightning
          Because I'll get over trying to be perfect in my own little way
          I am the woman I the future."
          
          This poem isn't done on one particular person but if I described how a person acts, that is probably how because nobody's perfect but everyone is amazing in on way or another.
          
          Kind regards,
          Belladeen 
          
            

your comment gives me heart to continue.

Thanks for taking a look at my book If Life Was Like a Poem! ^.^ I means a lot

@maidenjapan Your welcome. It is an interesting book so far. I can't wait to read the rest of it.

Thank you for adding my story to your reading list.