Hi, @janeabrei_2wnt! I checked your story. It was good. You have a great potential! My only feedback is please take time on fixing your grammar as well as the alignment of the texts. I am telling you this not to humiliate your or something because this is a constructive criticism
Anyways, please do also check my story. Just read the prolouge and the first chapter to see if it fits your cup of tea and if it does, you can continue reading and promote it to your friends
TITLE: Eula Floresca
GENRE: Romance
STATUS: Ongoing
— SPECIAL FEATURES —
1. Grammatically correct texts. (You can kindly correct me if you spot some mistakes.)
2. Organized alignment of texts.
3. Photos from Pinterest inserted as a technique to enhance our visualization. It allows us to see the actual outfits of the characters, their properties, and the setting of the story.
4. Trivias included since this story narrates how the two main characters became academic rivals.
5. Unique plot. I tried my best to write scenes that is not cringe and cliché to read. The humor is also timely.
PLEASE, TELL ME I SUCCESSFULY PERSUADED YOU TO CHECK MY STORY! THANK YOU IN ADVANCE!
https://www.wattpad.com/story/360975480?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Belsap16