ahh_freshbeats67
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Hey Author,
I read your story. The one about nightmare Totoro. I do like how it had a premise, even though it kind of lacked. (Not trying to be mean; I'm doing a sort of review.) I do like some of the OG characters you made, like Mimi and her mother. The dialogue is very realistic and is believable. The characters, both OG and existing, are very sigma and are well written.
Like the guy below me, your creativity is peak and is great.
The biggest downside is the AI posters; you made great stories. You just need to get rid of the AI posters; they look hideous.
But overall your stories are great; you're a chill dude and a good writer.
Ben2200
@ahh_freshbeats67 Thanks for reading dude! I wrote this when I was a kid so its one of my least detailed stories. I dislike AI too, i just slapped it on as a placeholder but never got round to changing it. I look forward to finishing your book. Shadow of the Tiger is the most recent story im working on, im very proud of it and think you'll enjoy it!
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