BenSobieck

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TheOneWhoWrites18

Please excuse me Mr Sobieck,I have a question.Are we going to get more of Zandra?

BenSobieck

@TheOneWhoWrites18 
            
            I'm not writing anything new for Zandra right now, but I'm also not ruling anything out. We'll see!
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BenSobieck

Taking the dog for long walks at night, looking at Halloween decorations, listening to old Art Bell, catching the wafts of legal weed from the open garages, and just thinking. 
          
          It's good to have space like that. I've been grinding on an editing project for a novel that'll come out later this year. It's a semi-biographical piece 
          
          Art Bell had great taste for bumper music. "Some Velvet Morning" by Nancy Sinatra and Lee Hazlewood is an absolute banger.
          
          Still, you go into the archives for 20-year-old Coast to Coast episodes hoping to escape for an hour, and you realize it's the same proto-2024 paranoia that's always been there.
          
          We're either doomed or not doomed at all.

BenSobieck

@Aunt_Beany2 Nothing like when it hits
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Aunt_Beany2

*cue ominous music …
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BenSobieck

Today I learned "Ideocracy" is a real word, while "Idiocracy" is a real movie.

BenSobieck

@Aunt_Beany2 Thank goodness for the PACs working overtime to bring you just that!
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Aunt_Beany2

*… But  it’s also an election year and that seems … 
            
            *idiocractic platform   
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Aunt_Beany2

One word deals with ideas and the other deals with idiots.  
            
            Honestly I’m not very sure which word applies to  the idiots  since it seems like the idiots are running the government.  Butb it’s also an election year and that v seems to bring out the idiocy in all the political parties , especially those running on an idiocraric platform.  ‍‍
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BenSobieck

Doing a big editing project for a novel, and I'm cleaning up a lot of "soft" language in sentence structure. If you soften the sentence with "might," "could be," "started to," "seemed to," etc., you soften the stakes. This is a piece of military fiction, so these word choices echo throughout the novel.
          
          That goes for passive sentence structure, too. Active structure moves forward. Passive structures add a tiny, unconscious pause. Tight sentences allow action and important details room to breathe, too.
          
          Just random thoughts. I am sitting alone, after all, and the dog doesn't care much.

Aunt_Beany2

Oh.  And my grammar ain’t any gooder 
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Aunt_Beany2

Is ok.  Me ain’t got no good english eeder 
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BenSobieck

P.S. In case anyone gets the wrong idea, I'M NOT THE PERFECT WRITER, EITHER. Editing is like coaching a football team. You can be right about something without ever suiting up.
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BenSobieck

I don't know how I missed this, but WEBTOON IS TRADING PUBLICLY ON NASDAQ!!??
          
          That means you can buy stock in Wattpad/Webtoon. Currently trading around 10 bucks.
          
          For the low, low price of $10 US, you can call yourself "owner" of this very site.
          
          https://www.nasdaq.com/market-activity/stocks/wbtn

JuanitasUniverse

lmao this app is so broken i’m embarrassed to use it, let alone own it 
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BenSobieck

Sometimes I think about what my kids will say to me when they figure out I'm on Wattpad. What will they think about these stories?
          
          And then I remember my kids won't think even for a millisecond that I'm cool enough to read.
          
          Very good. Carry on.