Benjamin Turek

@KeshaDEly I read your poetry/poetic song lyrics and I must say that your chosen free verse rhyme scheme is interesting but that because you begin by rhyming the last two lines of each stanza that if you took the last two stanzas of the poem and rhymed them with each other that it would reiterate and bring back your initial theme more. That was my only suggestion and my only comment is that if you took out the chorus and "whoooa" that this would be a good stand alone poem.

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