KevinMcKinney
I will try Gain.and hope I am not being repetitive. I like the story but the grammatical errors drive me crazy! I do not understand the spelling errors either but most of the stories here are plagued with them. You sometimes slip into the story as if you were in it. It makes the perspectives hard to follow as you are taking the first person position. One has to look and think that way.for the story developments but the idea is to havr the reader
BennyBen1010
No it's cool! Your just being honest. But I might give up on that story because I'm already restarting a new one. You can say a Terran 2.0