zesthoney
Heyo Jinnie
I saw whatchyu did there...
With the hand as a barrier that scene gave me a whole new Indian drama feel. But you have outdone yourself while writing this. The yearning is simply written so well it's like I would've wanted somebody to look at me like how Chan was looking at Hyunjin in this chapter.
OMG the obsession, the drama, the sass, the love, the care and to top it all the yearning...
Idk if it's the word yearning that I like or your chapter and characters describing it with mere words that are funny and sarcastic and lovable and omg.. If this chapter was a guy I'd be swoon for sure.. Loved every bit of it.. I loved the way he wiped the gloss off Chan's neck with a lil more force only to mark him again.
And let's not forget they're learning how to confront. I work in a school and even kids confront better than your idiots.. Ngl I loved the fact that Jinnie thinks and thinks and thinks in the chapter and when he does what he does that's when we are on the edge of our office chairs.. God forbid I only wanted to work.. All I have done at work is read this chapter.. And guess what I had only thought about you this morning thinking at this rate the story will need another year or many more and I'm still never giving up.. Because you kill us with your words only for us to wake up and find out we are at work.. If I had the chance I'd love to live this story. Idk I would've enjoyed the drama.. Being somewhere as a fab or a chandelier idk
zesthoney
@zesthoney Hehe I loved you're reply you're in such a hurry work does that to one ik how that is. Take all the time in the world because every chapter is worth the wait. Mini hearts sent to you Hehe.. And yes I love noticing stuff in your chapters.. I won't Jinnie don't worry
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