Hi...
Since reading and following your book, I have come to really appreciate the effort that you put into the entire plots and characters. Through the last couple of weeks/months, I have noticed that the story is basically aimed on an intense situation which means that you've aimed for more of a serious sense of writing. However, though I find your writing skills immensely impressive, it would be refreshing to add a bit of humor into the story. That way, there will be an addition to the diverse plots that you have already installed into this entire book. Maybe an addition of a new character that would bring humor would be what you need to boost your votes??. The reason why I have suggested to add a little humor to this situation, is because in reality, no matter the situation, there is and will be a point in time where something humorous and funny that would pop up unexpectedly. Making life a more bearable I guess.. :)...
So yeah.. Please don't feel that I am in some way trying to dictate how you write or degrading what you have done so far. I am merrily making suggestions to the observations that I've made. Despite everything, I true believe that you are indeed an intelligent writer that I have come to appreciate and.. To some extent.. Envy!.. This is the longest message I have ever sent anyone so if you've read this far than it is beyond appreciated on my part. (So sorry that this message is so long.. ^_^)
Other then that, I look forward to the continuation of your book 'Hybrid' and any other of your books created on watt pad...
With all my good wishes and best of luck,
xxx.... :) ^_^
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