Bernardusz

Happy Easter! ✨
          	
          	I wanted to get Chapter 14 out tonight, but I’ve hit a bit of a wall. I’m taking the rest of the evening to touch grass and reset my brain. Quality over speed, right?
          	
          	Enjoy your holiday, and I’ll have the next update ready for you once I’ve recharged. Thanks for being the best readers!
          	
          	Oh man, that was too cringe It's just weird for me to be overly formal, so yeah I am just gonna say it, I doom scrolled on Easter, and worse than that I spent all afternoon plotting my original trilogy, editing it when it's clearly in my parking lot  Another reason I created my fanfic is so I can train prose and stamina, so I can write my own trilogy
          	
          	So now you understand why, I am genuinely sorry. My brain is fried, and if I rush, I can't guarantee the quality. And I don't want Kiana and Lucifer's story to be written badly.
          	
          	So yeah, Happy Easter guys

Bernardusz

Happy Easter! ✨
          
          I wanted to get Chapter 14 out tonight, but I’ve hit a bit of a wall. I’m taking the rest of the evening to touch grass and reset my brain. Quality over speed, right?
          
          Enjoy your holiday, and I’ll have the next update ready for you once I’ve recharged. Thanks for being the best readers!
          
          Oh man, that was too cringe It's just weird for me to be overly formal, so yeah I am just gonna say it, I doom scrolled on Easter, and worse than that I spent all afternoon plotting my original trilogy, editing it when it's clearly in my parking lot  Another reason I created my fanfic is so I can train prose and stamina, so I can write my own trilogy
          
          So now you understand why, I am genuinely sorry. My brain is fried, and if I rush, I can't guarantee the quality. And I don't want Kiana and Lucifer's story to be written badly.
          
          So yeah, Happy Easter guys

smartguy179

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Don't know where else to write this but just wanted to come here and say this, holy fuck is your story good. I read the first chapter and immediately got hooked and within about 2-3 hours read the entire thing. An awesome read and i can't wait to see more. Keep it up!

smartguy179

I just finished reading the new chapter so ignore that lol. Good stuff though cause its important to her character.
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smartguy179

Hmmm. I'd say...bring up a little more about Kiana's past team. This is important to her. Not necessarily to Lucifer right now but more so her inner struggles with it. That she lost Himeko, her missing bond with Mei and Bronya, stuff like that. The struggle that she is a clone (even though that was revealed to her by Sirin). Stuff like that because if I'm not mistaken, this story takes place 2 weeks after the events of Sirin's honkai eruption. This is the 1st thing off the top of my head that I'd think about
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Bernardusz

@smartguy179 I want to know what you feel is lacking in my story. Maybe the prose is too verbose or too still, maybe you feel the pacing is too fast. Anything you feel this can be improved
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Bernardusz

Hello everyone, I'm sorry I haven't uploaded new chapters, and this week I also can't upload a chapter. This week I got a midterm, and now, I just want to rest. Combined with a personal problem, I'm sorry I have to take 2 weeks off. But since I got holiday next week, I'd probably make up these 2 weeks off. Once again, I'm sorry, everyone