I really appreciate this criticism and I defiantly agree with the whole "being rushed" thing which led to the poor character development and lack of depth... I'm glad that you're honest with what I need to work on it's really helpful. I'm planning on taking all of these suggestions (future ones too?) in consideration. Again I really appreciate it!
@BethBud woah! thx for the vote of my nrt fic!:3 btw...i just realized i just added earlier today ur nrt fic on my library and/or "nrt" reading list xD