BethBud

@YokiLoki :D you're welcome, I love your stories

SheepThatGotAway

@BethBud  thx for voting anf comming my stories. and adding one of them to ur reading lists :3
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BethBud

I really appreciate this criticism and I defiantly agree with the whole "being rushed" thing which led to the poor character development and lack of depth... I'm glad that you're honest with what I need to work on it's really helpful. I'm planning on taking all of these suggestions (future ones too?) in consideration. Again I really appreciate it!