Bethan_Norman

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Hi , I'm new in wattpad ! I'm writing a short story . Could take a look ? humbly grateful http://w.tt/1QRB2ww
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Bethan_Norman

Do you think you could have a read at either 'The Fall' or 'China Alice Doll' so I can get your opinion on them and how I can improve 
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Bethan_Norman

Yeah I'll have a read of it no problem 
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