Bethany Duffy

Perhaps I downloaded, all u had written, in my cell, so I had UR story before u deleted it, so in my cell it still held the story, so u deleting it off Wattpad did nothing to my already downloaded story!?

Hummmmmmm. weird, because I'm reading it.....

If u deleted it, then how come I can read it?

Ok Bethany, I just finished the first chapter, and I saw many mistakes, and wording issues, but then I thought about how I'm in America an ur in the UK, so I'm sure people reading this story from the UK probably understand it just fine!!  But I'd say u've got my intrest!!  The main thing I'm having a problem with is every time UR using i describing a person, or feeling, u need Ty o ALWAYS Capitalize the I, and using 'to emphasize the thinking' where as when someone's actually talking, "U need quotation marks!" 
          And when theres more than 1 person talking, they each need a new paragraph. Lol, thats good in 2 ways:
          1. It shows that u know how to write!
          2. It makes ur story longer 
          I'm sorry, u probably already know this, but I'm just telling u about what I've read so far!!

Here we, or I go..... 

Sounds good, I just got into a story, so when I'm through it, I'll read yours!!

     Thanks for the follow, here's my deal. 21 years ago I was in an accident that put me into a 3.5 months. 6 months after I graduated, ON the very day I registered at our local college! I'd fallen for my 42 y/o English teacher, I was 17, and I worked my a** off in her class and received 120%, and my school memory was still intact, thank God, so now when I read stories on here I immidately notice ALL the errors, and I will admit I've made a couple of friends, that I still talk with!! 
                In fact my English teacher an I went on a few drama/orchestra watching dates, and was my first thing I had to see when I got to school to get a hug and kiss, just a Peck on the lips, in fact she was one of the first people I saw when I awoke from my Coma!! 
               And we still talk on the phone, talking about getting together for a lunch date!! Sorry for rambling, but that's why you only see the stories I've read, I usually get story ideas while reading a story, and talking with the author!! So I guess I'd like to know if it'd be ok for me to read your story and IF I see any mistakes, not saying I will, but could I point them out to you?
          Thanks Bethany, 
          Misty