BeyondLife1000

I have started writing something that is certainly.... what's the word? Different. Yes, I've been writing something a bit different from what I normally do. It's called Kings of the Era (might consider changing titles to Kings and Queens of the Era) and I've been writing little 'clips' of different character's points of view.

BeyondLife1000

I have started writing something that is certainly.... what's the word? Different. Yes, I've been writing something a bit different from what I normally do. It's called Kings of the Era (might consider changing titles to Kings and Queens of the Era) and I've been writing little 'clips' of different character's points of view.

-M_Star-

↓Read it all!↓
          
          ↓I mean it!↓
          
          ↓Read it all!↓
          
          If you were killed, I wouldn’t be at your funeral.
          
          I’d be in jail for killing the person who killed you.
          
          We are true friends.
          
          We ride together, we die together.
          
          Send this to everybody you care about, including me, if you care.
          
          See how many times u get this.
          
          I want you to know you are an amazing friend, till death and forever.
          
          If I don’t get this back, I understand.
          
          But I have a game for you.
          
          Once you read this letter,
          
          you must send this to 15 people, including me.
          
          If you get at least three back, you are loved.
          
          Nobody knows how important something is, until they lose it

BeyondLife1000

Today, someone voted for my Lionheart prologue. This brought my attention back to it and then I realized that the way I wrote it sucked. Yes, I just admitted that it sucked, but I’m only saying that because I want to improve on it. It wouldn’t hurt to do this. In my opinion, the plot is good, just not the way it was written. Hmm. I need to practice writing more. If I don’t revise Lionheart, then that would mean I am more likely going to revise “The Desert Walkers”. To be honest, that’s the only book of mine that I actually feel motivated to continue.