BhHathiwar

So... Today my Birthday 
          	
          	Happy birthday to me 

Shadow_Lust

@BhHathiwar of which book bro?
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BhHathiwar

So... Today my Birthday 
          
          Happy birthday to me 

Shadow_Lust

@BhHathiwar of which book bro?
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BhHathiwar

Uh I know that I haven't updated for a while. Truth is that I didn't have enough time to write chapters. My mother is sick and admit in hospital so that's the reason and I myself didn't feeling better. So I will update when everything is fine. Also, Please forgive me for not updating. 

8A23NikilThanali

@BhHathiwar we will wait and hope that she gets better
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CJ360X7

@BhHathiwar i hope it will still go well
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LegendsAsh

Bro please update 'Broken Pokemon Master' it is amazing

LegendsAsh

Bro you have not updated today also please update the story
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BhHathiwar

@LegendsAsh sorry i am very sorry bro. Today my little sister came so she didn't give me my phone and i was playing with her. I met her after 3 whole years. I will definitely publish a chapter tomorrow. 
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LegendsAsh

Bro you have not updated till now
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Shadow_Lust

Bro your Kalos high story is amazing. Any guesses when you are gonna update it. The concept is so amazing.

Shadow_Lust

@BhHathiwar oh ok. No problem bro take your time. But please update it once you get the time. It is too good.
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BhHathiwar

@Aadityakumar24 if I got time i will start updating it after 10 to 15 days and if my schedule is busy which will be so it will after 30 days  but i will try my best to update it
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vogue126

Hello bro you alive

BhHathiwar

@vogue126 thank you for your love and support
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vogue126

@BhHathiwar do it as you wish,no problem
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BhHathiwar

Hlo guys today I tried to write a story and chapter 1 is already out so please read my story and give suggestions to improve

BhHathiwar

@FrederickSamuel653  I write story and tried my best to follow your advice so please review it and tell more about my mistakes. Thank you 
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BhHathiwar

@FrederickSamuel653 thanks I will try my best. I have no experience of writing it is my first book. So I will try
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Lynchrity

@BhHathiwar I'm not a writer but I do read a lot of amourshipping books. So here's what I see from other books that I've read. Try to be more descriptive about what they are thinking and doing. And you said English wasn't your first languange. Why not try to go to Google translate and translate your languange from there and learn the grammar and meanings of the words written there. Hope this helps. Thank you
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