Shawtty👑

Guys one of my friends just started this new book please check it out and give me some feedback on it thank you.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/306037589

I’m super sorry if I’m disturbing you by posting this message. It’s just I’m writing a gxg story and I want feedback on what’s good and what I need to improve if that’s okay. 
          
          This story is a romance story with hints of possessiveness and jealousy as well as action too. I hope you’ll enjoy it if you decide to check it out. 
          
          Here’s the link if you do want to check it out :
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/338267402?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_story_details&wp_uname=JustABrokenGirl37&wp_originator=uNrr3%2FduWWnrGbviiNdYuH57gx%2F%2Bb6Xi7vHw9MfiKqq%2FS%2BnACIHZSMTdlsrFbaYfNnCn3JLwWPAeDYP%2FS1YjdWPOyyYMWnZhhhnVahqGYdz6RPHL0QQZgKmvTEhcGv7W
          
          Have a wonderful day and once again I’m sorry if I disturbed you

Can you please check out my novel, I'm a new author in this platform. Gracias. ♡
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/333456025?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=theinkedfeather&wp_originator=lL41rHCpONuXaBMB%2BnS5PkEcoz1vLljoUeINO4rNKf7uYizrO13lvDqVbMChUCF3Gwgxl18Ah6yxQyqw%2BhRhJAk998Dj2c1UpxET1mvj7SypBTyMCfhe16Bjb2Ti79ZA

My apologies for sliding into your Conversations board uninvited.
          I just wanted to grab your attention to my stories. There is an arranged marriage story, a teen romance, a young adult, and some mafia stories.
          Once again, I'm sorry for intruding.
           Have a nice day ahead!!!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/239672415-mafia-miss-honey

Hi.
          I hope you're accepting reading requests. I've started a new story "an anatomy of a wounded soul". It is a thrill/mystery teen fiction. 
          
          https://my.w.tt/MosMBd8jW5
          
          I hope you take a chance to read the story. 
          
          Please do and leave feedbacks. 
          
          Thank you.
          Aditi.
          ❤
          
          
          
          

Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better <3 

Hello @Bhadd_Shawtty ! Thank you so much for voting on 'The Hots'! ❤ I am happy you like the story and hope you're having a lot of fun. Stay safe, smile and have a wonderful day / night! Anny

It's my birthday 

Check it out plz
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/272983771

Hey you still wanna join that snap chat group?