ak47_151126

I'm looking for a collaborative editor to provide feedback on chapters for my action-fantasy, "Kalki: The Ashes." The story blends epic mythic elements with intense personal drama.
          
          I'm primarily seeking help with prose polish, pacing, and enhancing the overall reading flow. In return, I am happy to offer the same detailed critique for your work.
          
          If you enjoy grand, epic tales and have a sharp eye for detail, please message me!
          
          You can read the first chapter here to see if it's a good fit:
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/400477296-kalki-the-ashes

BharatiJoshi2

@ak47_151126 no it's okay but as I am collage student give some time okay 
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BharatiJoshi2

@ak47_151126 okay I will do but whenever i get time
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JetLaBarge

Thank you for adding me to your favorites. 
          	
          If you are just reading my stories for the first time, I have four stories, covering the years between The Battle of Hogwarts and Albus S Potter going to Hogwarts.
           “The First Year,” which may get a new title,
          “Bad Guys and Broomsticks,” 
          “Birth of the Potter Children,” 
          and “Raising Albus.” 
          
          I also have four Albus Potter stories,
          
          “Albus Potter and the Deathly Hallows,” 
          “Albus Potter, Classmates and Elves,” 
          “Albus Potter, Friends and Foes,”
          And “Albus Potter and the Prophesied Year.”
          
          All are finished.  I will correct mistakes if pointed out, but this long saga is basically finished.  I have a few more standalone Harry Potter stories I may post, especially if someone writes or reviews and wants more.
          
          I am sorry for duplicating this message if you have seen it before. I wanted to give a personal reply to everyone taking the time to favoring my stories, but cannot keep track of who favored what anymore.
          	
          Ideally you will favor me as an author.  Then you do not have to worry about favoring individual stories.  Favoring me as an author will get you any new stories when they are posted.  	
          
          Even brief reviews are appreciated.  Even more appreciated is information on what works or doesn’t work.  I would much rather hear that something was a problem for a reader than not hear anything.  
          
          Please star the chapters.  It is an easy way to reward me for all the time I have spent writing.
          
          Two of the best HP fictions I have read are by cpstabell.  She is writing a third HP story. Her Dream series is well worth reading as well.  The 19 year stories by swissdog are also excellent.
           
          Jet

Arpitique

Hi Dear,
          
          Sorry to drop this here without permission, but I’d really love it if you could give my story a read. Trust me, you won’t regret it!
          
          If you enjoy it, don’t forget to follow, vote, and leave your thoughts in the comments.
          
          Happy reading!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/389893934?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Arpitique

JiJoomi

Hey! I’ve been working on a story called "Destined Heart"
           (https://www.wattpad.com/story/364329438-destined-heart-fan-fiction-f4), 
          and I’d love for you to check it out.
          
          I'm really looking for readers who don’t just read silently but also engage with the story through comments and feedback. It can be really frustrating to write when it feels like no one is actively interacting—it gets boring, and I start to feel like I'm missing out on connecting with readers who might actually love the story. I’ve found books after years of searching and thought, 'Why didn’t I discover this earlier?' I don't want to miss that for others with my story!
          
          If you do read it, I’d be so grateful for your thoughts and comments! Your feedback means a lot and really helps me grow as a writer.
          
          If it’s not your thing, no worries at all—feel free to ignore or remove this message!
          
          Thanks so much for your support, and happy reading!  
          (https://www.wattpad.com/1428074460-destined-heart-fan-fiction-f4-disclaimer)

Shine_Sparkles

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