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BhavyaGarg099

@howyoudoing see* 
            And all the best for your future journey 
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BhavyaGarg099

@howyoudoing for sure !! 
            You will soon se me in your comment section ☺️
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howyoudoing

@BhavyaGarg099 thanku sweetheart ❤️
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Tooocooolforu

But something that confused me was her face which was streaked with tears . Why was she crying? I looked away as I wasn’t able to look at her tear filled eyes.
          Then Kaka’s sharp and strict voice came jolting her
          Kaka:Sadhwi idhar aa
          Fear flickered across her face, she took my in hers and gave it squeeze as if saying sorry , not wanting to let go. She looked into my eyes and said
          Sadhwi: I-I’m sorry
          And she ran away to kaka leaving me heartbroken. My dam broke, tears painted my face red , my hands were shivering and my heart… It was hurting a lot not because she rejected me no I had prepared myself for her rejection but something in her eyes , the way she held my hand and wiped my tears as if she couldn’t bear seeing me cry and the way her own lips were trembling seeing me cry … then why why did she go, Why did run away
          Why she didn’t leave me alone here even tho her eyes Screamed love
          Why,why,why?

Tooocooolforu

Pls I love you..
          I looked at her face and my breath hitched . Her eyes filled with tears not out of happiness but out of guilt and sadness. I was waiting for her response. But then her hand the one which I was holding came up to my face and started wiping my tears .
          My eyes closed my instantly  feeling the softness of touch. It did something to me, it worked perfectly like a balm on a wound

BhavyaGarg099

@Tooocooolforu  omg !!! .your writing is just so good 
            Perfectly descriptive 
            You are the perfect competition to Ritika di 
            Loved your writing !! 
            If you ever write your book pls remember me and do send it me 
            Men written by you will be incredibly good
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Tooocooolforu

.(my throat tightened due to the unwavering wave of emotions inside me. My tears were threatening to fall) now you’ve gone silent and you don’t know how much it , it hurts. Is there something which has triggered you, have I done something wrong pls  pls tell me but don’t ignore me. 
          I held her hand in mine tears running down my face and I confessed .
          Arush:Sadhwi hit me punish me for something which I even don’t know but pls don’t stop talking to me pls. I know it’s not the correct time we still have career ahead but but I love you… How,when,why  I don't know but your silence was eating me alive

Tooocooolforu

Arush: You think I don’t notice your silence, your blank eyes, the way you always hum these days instead of laughing or giggling as usual.
          Sadhwi:Wh-What are u talking about, I am totally normal.
          
          
          Arush:Oh please Sadhwi pls don’t call this normal , I don’t know this sadhwi..I know the one who always used to call, call me aalu-Alu ka chilka but now..

Tooocooolforu

POV of Arush
          I had enough of this silence I asked her many times but she just dismissed the conversation or just hummed. Why , why is she doing this to me, What have I done wrong? 
          Now I am with her near the garden.
          Arush: Sadhwi What’s wrong?
          Sadhwi: What?

Tooocooolforu

Hey I will post the pov of Arush when Sadhwi rejected him her ok
          
          It’s been 3 days , 3 days since sadhwi distanced herself from Arush . It’s not like she didn’t talk to him at all she did but the underlying warmth, the comfort which Arush loved that was missing. Frustrated Arush marched towards the servant quarters and pulled sadhwi with him near the garden. These three days were the hardest days for Arush. He was dying to hear ‘Allu ka chilka’ from Sadhwi . And in these passing days he realised something  very fragile and pure…
          Love.

Tooocooolforu

This is the first part
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ShreeAgastyawritz

Hey sweetheart!  I’ve just published my story on Wattpad and I’d love for you to give it a read. Your support and feedback mean the world to me! Do check it out and let me know your thoughts  Here’s the link to my book: 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/401865650?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=ShreeAgastyawritz

BhavyaGarg099

@ShreeAgastyawritz  surely !! All the best for your journey
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