@BibliophileNups Thanks for your constructive criticism and compliments :). I'm not really happy with my first chapters tbh at least until the 7th, I was so excited about showing my work that I didn't pay attention to certain things. I pretty much worship writers like Eric jerome dickey and Flaubert they're pro for long descriptions, I wish I could re-write the first chapters because it's only after a little while that I started to pick up my own style of writing (if we call it that). I'm not following any rule or try to be copy anybody when it comes to the topics brought up in my book nor should I with the structure. Your advices are much appreciated, let me know when you finally publish your book I'd enjoy to read it ❤
