Hi, good evening. I'm dong flooding 40 comments on your work & I'm happy reading it naman, though so true na bagong-bago ka pa lang sa pagsusulat. Work it out, maging creative ka pa 'rin, palawigin mo ang imagination mo, don't just tell, show what you have in mind. Keep going pa 'rin. Looking forward sa mga bagong update mo, makita ko how you apply my little tips sa writing, sana... You don't take that as an offensive critique, I just really want to help. & to remind you also, sana matapos mo 'rin basahin yung akin, want to hear from you, I'm not a perfect writer naman, & likewise, I need feedback, para ma-edit ko at ma-enhance ko yung work ko. ^^