I'm working on part two guys, suffered from a writer's block the past week, but I got back at it tonight. Wrote another three pages :D
Also, I removed the backstory as it gives information I'm trying to put into the story itself. If you are at any point confused by what's going on, let me know. It might be intentional, but chances are I screwed up ;P
Next to that I reworked chapter one a bit, as work is never done ;)
Part two will follow the story through the eyes of Aztlan, Maya, Qiwi and a new character called Miqael :D