hi BigNeptune I just wanted to say that you're a really talented writer. Your writing style is engaging, and you're especially good at ending chapters with cliffhangers. Although I think there are a bit too many of them in He's Just a Skater Boy, they work really well in The King's Personal Joker.
That said, I do have one criticism. You write very slowly. You started The King's Personal Joker back in 2015, and it's still not finished. I honestly think keeping your readers waiting for that many years is a bit too much.
Have you considered publishing your books on Kindle or similar platforms? I think your work deserves a wider audience, and it might also motivate you to finish your stories.✨