@Average_Male_Goth I'm not into Naruto but if you want advice then I can give you a few amateurish tips. Best one I can think is to write the way you would judge someone else's work. My biggest peeve while reading is grammer and punctuation. Yes, sometimes you will misspell a word or a comma but at least try your best. Another thing would be to make an effort to add something more when a character is speaking instead of Person A: Grand speech! Then, Person B: Reply. I personally won't read any stories like that. Put effort in your work! Something that you like to look at proudly. And finally and most importantly! Write the story how you like it. If you want your chat to lead the story, great! But, make the story how you like it. Whether it has a terribly sad ending or one that is so cliche that you could tell from the first chapter. Its your story, write it how you want it to go. Also finally², have fun. This kind of writing is supposed to be fun and relaxing, not stressful at seeing how much people will like it. I don't care if people don't like my stuff, they can go somewhere else. As for the people who do, great! I hope this helps you!