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Hey @daizyujin I just wanna first say thank you for checking out my story. I read one of your stories (The Shadows of Fairy Tail) and I would like to say your writing style isn't questionable. The way you write is similar to screenplays and play writes which it made me understand how you write really quickly to understand your story. I will say for any casual reader it may prove difficult, but you're the writer so you choose how you feel any story you make should be written. A few pointers I can give you is:
            1) If you're inspired and have your own story idea, do it 
            2) Before you begin writing think of the whole story: what characters you wanna show, what things you want to happen, how it begins and how it ends. The middle of a story works it's way out if you have the beginning and end made (that goes for any story) 
            3) Think of how you wanna have it read (1st person or 3rd). In the sense of Cooler's Wrath, I wrote it in third person to get the scope of all characters involved. 
            4) Proof read before posting, read it and if you can vision the action in your head then for sure other people can vision it too when they read it (and you'll spot an errors that you may miss, I've had a reader mention an error that I missed lol)
            
            I hope these pointers help one way or another. I'm a filmmaker and a story writer but I too have things to learn/improve when it comes to writing too (everyone does). Whenever you have the story created don't hesitate to share it, it's cool to see other's creative work. 
            
            Best