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The struggles of being a slime monster...ISN'T VERY MANY.

"The scariest moment is always just before you start." ~Stephen King

‘Deep Under’
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          To begin with, I shall release my inner fan girl. -I FREAKING LOVE THIS NOVEL AND I WOULD DRAW FANART FOR IT IF I COULD- Okay, so that’s over. I loved how the author put depth into the story and developed the characters in such interesting ways during the plot line; which was well constructed. There were a few spots that could have been worded differently, but they were few and far between. This is a great story-and even though my innocent eyes are probably ruined now-the author uses the mature themes wisely and allows pleanty  of room for action, fluff, and adventure. One of the only thing I suggest is to describe things a little more. Pictures from the internet gives the readers a visual, but I believe in imagination. Not just characters, either. When Aquarius come on land, what exactly did he see? Trees and buildings, yes, but were there any colors unfamiliar to him? Did he see any other animals? Etc., etc. If I were to give the book a grade, I would give an A+.
          
          Good job.

"I don't believe in failure. Failure is just information and an opportunity to change your course." ~Ophray Winfrey

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