edwardnelson84
@BlackAndBeautiful786 I really enjoyed the way your story The Past and The Future (New Version). It felt complete and thoughtful and it stayed consistent with the tone from the beginning. That kind of balance is not easy to maintain. At the same time I feel like there’s still room to expand a few moments and make them even more powerful. I’d honestly enjoy talking it through with you and sharing a few ideas while also hearing more about your vision. We can continue on insta and discord with the same name edward_nelson01