-blackroses

What happened to your book? It showed that you had published the book but I haven't seen it.

BlackPiano6

@-blackroses What do you mean about the beginning?
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-blackroses

@-blackroses  Like how you started the beginning off and How you introduce a character. You should introduce things about them over time and not introduce them like your just breaking the fourth wall (readers thing) all at once. That just gives away the element of surprise.
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BlackPiano6

@-blackroses I know that much but honestly I think what i have now is better than before. But what do you think i need editing on?
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hiddenheartprincess

Hey! Thanks so much for the follow! I hope you enjoy my stories!

hiddenheartprincess

@Platypus1114 Aww I'm glad! Let me know how you like them!
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BlackPiano6

@hiddenheartprincess I LOVE your stories!! I am literally binge reading the finding love series right now
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