OSHUN BOOK:
Okay, so, I’m having a bit of back and forth problem here a storyline changing decision.
Lowkey, I’m on the front about reducing Aizawa’s relationship with Niari to a close friend who falls in love with her, rather than them being engaged and getting married. Looking back on it, it just feels so abrupt and empty almost, especially since you hardly see the chemistry of them as a couple, and then suddenly they’re moving in together and merging a family.
I’m thinking about taking a different romantic aspect of Niari’s character with someone else, instead. But I’m not sure if I want to commit to it because that means I’ll have to do a lot of rewriting (which I’m already doing), as well as come up with a greater, in depth storyline, to match that. But I’m willing to do it, only if I know it’s worth it.
What do yall think?