Black_Knight305

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So, I just started reading "Painful Cuddles", a Murder Drones fanfic, and while reading it I came across the most inspiring set of words known to man
          	
          	
          	"Fuck it"
          	
          	
          	
          	
          	So I said, "Fuck it, let me do my own" and now I'm about to write a V x N MD Fanfic. Let's hope I don't forget my other stories or that I don't pull through with this one cuz I have a history of doing that.

trooper12345

So if I can say something about one thing that is confusing for me for the last 3 parts. It will be the wording and what I mean is that I can't tell who is talking sometimes, so if anything can you make of who is talking to make sure you can tell who is talking. Don't take this the Wrong way. i still love the story very much.

Black_Knight305

@trooper12345 No, no. It's fine. I understand and will try my best to clarify who's talking in future chapters.
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trooper12345

or it can be just me
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trooper12345

I LOVE your catnap x hoppy hopscotch story as it is one of the best written story's i have seen on this app and the only story that is on this app

Black_Knight305

@trooper12345 Thanks! This really boosted my confidence. I originally thought the story was mediocre at best and that the pacing was a bit too fast.
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Black_Knight305

this message may be offensive
So, I just started reading "Painful Cuddles", a Murder Drones fanfic, and while reading it I came across the most inspiring set of words known to man
          
          
          "Fuck it"
          
          
          
          
          So I said, "Fuck it, let me do my own" and now I'm about to write a V x N MD Fanfic. Let's hope I don't forget my other stories or that I don't pull through with this one cuz I have a history of doing that.

Black_Knight305

Hey, I might go back to my roots and I might do a Valt x Aiger or Valt x Cuza. Which one do you guys think I might do (I'll still work on my Yamato x Luffy book. I just wanted to see if my writing has improved compared to how I wrote back then)

Boomerzecreeper3

@Black_Knight305 I would say Valt x Aiger, but I would wanna see a Valt x Cuza book more if I'm gonna be honest with myself. (  ̄▽ ̄)
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