@Chance56789 Hey, i thought your book was really nice. It really gives me second thoughts. Half wat through, i was like " OMG, i do it too"
Even though i don't really know much about Pokemon, but i can kind of understand why your pissed.
One suggestion though, in future, maybe you could make your chapters longer.
Other than that, i really loves your book and hope you keep it up!
:)