Blackstorm101

https://www.wattpad.com/story/361686939-from-zero-a-step-to-draconic-deus-and-beyond

Balskdjfhg13785946

Are you alive?

Blackstorm101

@Balskdjfhg13785946 I will, and yeah, understood.
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Balskdjfhg13785946

@Blackstorm101 its not just about the setting, but the execution of the story too thats important. As long you can make it at least not generic(like bullied in past life) or just subverting a genre just right, you can get a pretty good story. Just look at my mess of a first story of you want any indication of terrible writings.
            Take your time king, rome wasnt build In a day you know. Just message something here from time to time to tell us if your alive or something along those line. No need to tell the detail of the story, just write 'story "insert title" is still being worked on' Will do. Don't worry big guy, we also have irl bullshitery to go through(like my 4th semester in college software engineering shenanigans) so we can wait.
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Blackstorm101

@Balskdjfhg13785946 thanks
            
            (Currently revising DxD power system, make a new story out of it. Sth about a regular guy got into the supernatural world and how he react to those and how he do things to solve that. Yeah may be bland, but it’s the idea I got on my mind currently)
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Ompatel09

Wraith: The Oblivion. I get it now. And did Mage the Ascension inspire the Nasuverse magic system?

Ompatel09

It's good
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Blackstorm101

@Ompatel09 hmmm, some similarities, and similar concepts. Maybe 
            
            (Sorry for the late reply…. The phone broke)
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TheFunLad

Out of curiosity, how do you think a story with Christopher Valzelide as a protagonist go? Would it eve be Valzelide or would it be much like the case of Keraunos where he considers himself a living failure?

Blackstorm101

@TheFunLad well, Christopher Valzelide as a protagonist, is probably, in my opinion , would be Reinhard Heydrich’s early days but as a hero. Though progression further and we got Keruanos.
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Ompatel09

Former Occultist?. That would explain Ayin's role in your FGO fanfic

Ompatel09

@Blackstorm101 Considering her relation to the Abrahamic God. She's possibly above the Ultimate Ones
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Ompatel09

 Considering how you portrayed Ayin. I’m certain Angra Mainyu would piss himself knowing about her
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Blackstorm101

@Ompatel09 hah, yeah
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Balskdjfhg13785946

Hello, just asking are you alive? If so just say yes
          Also, just a personal rant
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/319525394-story-of-the-dark-knight
          Ilike the previous version of the protag more than the current one. Not saying the current one is bad, but it makes the overall story dont make sense like some edgy abused fanfic that common nowadays, the previous one just evil(somewhat) with no abused backatory is a lot more rare and have a lot more potential(atleast in my opinion) but the current story also have potential so at the end of the day, the choice is yours king. Im just stating my opinion so do as you wish with it, peace

Balskdjfhg13785946

@Blackstorm101 its okay king, just finish whatever irl business you have and take a rest first before back to writing, after all "a healthy body is a healthy mind" so take your time king, we can wait
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Blackstorm101

@Balskdjfhg13785946 Ah completely understand 
            
            And yes, I’m alive. But right now i had to stay out of writing for a while. So expect indefinite hiatus. But don’t worry, I’ll be back….. I think
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