Nunatak

Hello there, Blahblah, 
          
          I know what you're thinking, "Oh great . . . another boring, annoying request," right? I won't deny that this probably is annoying, and I would like to apologize for bothering you; but I did as you advised on your profile, and I'd love your opinion even more! 
          
          Anyways, I'm new to Wattpad, but I'm pretty familiar with the messed-up generalization-promoting dynamics of the site already, and I can say (or hope, at least) that my characters are not Mary/Gary Sues, and my plot is not a skeletal literary rehash of trashy things that aren't even a part of the English language. I'm trying to keep it real despite that the genre is fantasy, mystery, and crime/action-thriller. 
          Here is a synopsis of my temporarily titled "Grimminally Ever After": 
          Affluence? Gone. 
          Living apparatus? Gone. 
          Multi-million corporate inheritance? Gone. 
          Legacy and all dignified reputation? Gone. 
          Only people that ever cared about his existence? Gone. 
          
          Welcome to the life of former Wall Street-mastermind-in-the-making and ex-Manhattan socialite, Lion du Moreau--whose most current transaction involve "migrating to an obscure village no one knows about with idiotic idealists for adoptive parents." Lasthaven's the strangest place in the world, where the the residents are hardly even sane, for the most part, or even physiologically credible! Lion is forced to take on a job he has absolutely no experience in, or even doesn't resent, but in life, you don't get what you want. Join this strangely determined careerist on his thrilling journey of cracking logic-defying cases, all the while dealing with depression attacks,and having every principle he ever stood by put to the test, as well as the most aggravating, pseudo-sadistic, mentally unstable, yet lovably and hatefully ingenious partner known in case-closing history! 
          
          That's not the whole thing, but thanks for the time, for reading this! 
          -Solfatara

bumblebee17

hi 
          i was wondering if u would check out my story it is called The Nexus and it is about a teenager who is a contract killer and his name is Bullet - his code name. 
          I hope u can check it out soon and please comment when u do. 
          Thanks 
          Bumblebee17

pandapurple9

heey just wondering if you would read a preview i have for my story, its short... but it would mean a lot .. im just starting it and i dont know what to name it .. if you have suggestions for it go aheadd and tell me! :) 
          if you cant or just dont want to read my story thats fine.. 
          
          its about a girl whose best friend (adrianna) just went missing and everyone thinks adrianna is dead .. turns out adrianna read a book that transported her into a new world where a war has broken out.. the evil capture adrianna and hold her hostage. the only way that adrianna can be freed from the other world is if her best friend (sofia) finds the book and reads it, but adrianna doesnt know if she really wants to leave after she falls in love with both of the princes ( that are step brothers but are against each other in war.)

Beautiful_Diaster93

Hey, my name is Kyh. And I was wondering if you could read my new story P.S. I Hate You. I know these can get annoying, but I would really appriecate it if you could. If you like it, become an fan, comment, vote, spread the word! If not thank you for taking the time out of your day to read this message. 
          Here's an preview:
          
          P.S. I Hate You
          Chapter One- Nicole
          The sun beamed down on me as it rose this morning. Last night's events flashed through my head, as I became more awake. The way he touched me, caressed me, held me; last night was amazing. The body next to me shifted and rolled over. I turned over and looked at his handsome sleeping face. Strongly defined chin, eyes the color of deep blue, wavy dark brown hair, perfectly pouty lips. This guy was every girls dream, but he isn't mine. Besides his charming good looks, he was and complete and utter asshole. He was inconsiderate, arrogant, cocky, condescending, everything you wouldn't want in a guy, yet every chick wants him! I don't get it. And yet he's lying right next to me. He's my enemy, and I just lost my virginity to him. 
          *******
          Two days earlier
          I was in AP Biology with my best friend, Jamie. He's been my best friend since we were in diapers. Jamie stood 6'2', athlete’s body, square chin, eyes the shade of jade green, the lips of an Greek God. Yep, my best friends hot, but he was so much more to me. He was my big brother, my protector, my hard rock. All the girls have been wanting him since high school started, but he's had his eye on somebody else. That somebody would be my older sister/twin Samone. He's been in love with her for years, but she's never know his true feelings, because he has never gotten the courage to tell her. And every time he does, it always finds a way to backfire. Jamie's also the McGinley High's star quarterback. 
          Mrs. McKee was boring us as usual, when Ethan Robinson decided to walk in as if he own the world. Ethan Robin was the school's most popular guy next to Jamie.

bored65

read my story? it's called
          "i have to be his wife.... or slave wtf! i h8 my life
          really appreciate it . of course i will return the favor. but justt leave a comment on the last few chapter let me know youve been by ok?
          THANKS A BUNCH
          -jessica

serval

Hey, I know the­se are super annoying, and I'm­ not gonna beg
          But I have this story called
          'An Albino On A­ Reality Show.. What could go wrong?'
          that I was hopi­ng you could take a look at an­d give my some feedback!
          Thanks, I know ­these get annoying!
          (: