Blake_Alice_Collins

a lot of bl authors have been disappearing, have you noticed? kinda sad since I wanted to reread their stories

Filo readers! Who loves transmigration! This is for youuuu!!! 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/271735611

11/10! Could go higher but I think I missed a lot in the plot cuz I don’t really have the time to read it, only between break-times. Also, I paused at the middle to read the other book “Chief McKinnon the Highlander”, so I kinda forgot some details but STILL! Its great! Love it, the fluff, the little angst. The characters are also quite interesting… There are some scenes and monologues that made me reflect about my life, and its crazy. Shout out to the author! Great job!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/311391597?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=Blake_Alice_Collins

This might be off but I give this a 3/10. Sorry. I can’t stop cringing because of the errors. Though, I do understand if the author is not fluent in English. But as someone who’s obsess with languages and learning them I have to drop this. Again, not the author’s fault. It’s juts me. 
          
          However, plot-wise? I give it a 5/10. To be honest, I can’t get pass chapter 17. I just think it’s a bit rush and the characters are… actually I don’t know how to describe it. I can only say that it was a bit off. The way the author construct the sentence is a bit vague. Like, I really don’t know what the hell was happening, at one point the mc is this and suddenly he’s that. Everyone misinterprets everything making it the “sub-plot”. 
          
          I really don’t know what else to say but I wish the author could come back to this story and improve it. ‘Cuz I genuinely believe it has the potential for a fluff BL. I just thought that, maybe the author is more going for a mature content but does not exactly know how to build or construct it— kind of way.
          
          So, yeah…. That’s all. Thank you hehe. This is all my thoughts, okay? Don’t make it as if this is a source material to agree upon.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/116515910?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=Blake_Alice_Collins

LOOOOOVE the slow burn here! The build up, the tease, the frustration? Perfect! Tho I may have to give it a 9.5/10. I think the ending is a bit of a rush(?). Or maybe because I was too greedy for more drama hehe 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/253655221?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=Blake_Alice_Collins

This one too :)
          So funny. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/116515910-chief-mckinnon-the-highlander-manxboy

Hey 
          Have you read this one?  10/10
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/311391597-a-drink-before-battle-mxm-%E2%9C%85

Not a favorite but I cried at the end. 7/10
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/250905203?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=Blake_Alice_Collins

6.5/10 for the writing! I think this could have been so much more. There’s a lot of “what if”s situation here and it kinda ruins it because, you know, plot holes. But anyways, it was great! I just wish we have more character developments.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/315270493?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=Blake_Alice_Collins

10000000000000000/10! This one hit the nail! If I haven’t read the Retsuden I might call this canon! But I know that’s kinda impossible with some elements mention here. But the amount of details that fill the plot wholes in the original is just *chef’s kiss.  BEAUTIFUL!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/223247279?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=Blake_Alice_Collins