Blazeeread

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Blazeeread

Hello everyone,
          
          I’m really sorry for not posting any chapters these past couple of weeks. The reason was that my Wattpad account had a glitch... I couldn’t see or read any books, my reading list disappeared, my book was gone, and even all my drafts vanished. For a while, I thought everything had been deleted and lost forever.
          
          After a lot of back-and-forth with Wattpad support, the issue finally got resolved, and I managed to get my book back. That’s why I’ve published two chapters today just for you all!
          
          Please, please do comment on the chapters and let me know your thoughts.... I’d love to hear your feedback.
          
          With love,
          Blazee Reads 

Blazeeread

To all my lovely readers,
          
          First of all, thank you so much for taking the time to read Twist of Fate and for sharing your honest feedback. I truly appreciate every comment because it helps me grow as a writer and understand your reading experience better.
          
          I want to let you know that I’ve gone back and reworked the earlier chapters. I’ve edited and added more scenes and dialogues to bring greater emotional depth and clarity, especially for new readers who might feel confused in the beginning. However, some things are still intentionally left unanswered, not because they were missed, but because they are part of the storyline’s suspense and gradual unfolding. I’ve built a few cliffhangers and layered hints on purpose, and these will be revealed later as the plot progresses.
          
          This book is written entirely from the author’s point of view, not the characters’. I understand many Wattpad readers are used to reading character POVs, where emotions and thoughts are directly expressed. But author POV is also a narrative style; one that allows certain emotions, motives, and truths to remain hidden until the right moment. It creates space for surprise, for curiosity, and for readers to piece things together as they go.
          
          The character development, emotional shifts, and behavioral changes have been carefully planned and will be explained in future chapters. Some transitions may seem sudden now, but they are purposeful and will make more sense as you continue reading.
          
          That said, I never take your feedback lightly. I value it immensely. It shows your involvement and care for the story. My only intention is to create something meaningful, and if even one reader connects deeply with it, it means the world to me.
          
          So thank you once again for reading, for commenting, and for sharing your thoughts with honesty and kindness. It truly helps more than you know.
          
          With love and gratitude,
          Blazee Reads 
          

elenatheyalvor

@BLAZEE_READS I understand your pov thank u for sharing unleft answer
             
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elenatheyalvor

Hey author I m completed 20 chapter overall the chapters were really good but there are some off part which I felt...tbh I m giving my opinion about your novel....storyline and your writing skill is so good.....and I guess you knew I m damn excited to start your novel....but what I faced problem while reading that I cant feel any connection between the characters and me as a reader. A reader really loves n connect with novel when they are really into characters. They know their character well or understand their pov. Storyline is interesting which helps to read more chapter but what the point of having good storyline if we cant feel any connection to the characters. Its like you are listening to someone experience without being connected. From starting 1 to 10 chapter we cant relate to any character as there are just pov what going on not their pov you tried to tell us their pov but it still lacks I dont know how to explain that but I felt that. Its really make me hard to understand them and there are a lot of time skip which is another minus points and you cut most of the parts where they should have intracted which helps us to understand them more. What I dont understand why she is not upset with her sis. I understand she loves her sis and in one chapter she also says sometimes she feels her sis always thinks of herself but she didnot angry at her. In previous chapter she was shy then she was bold and sassy but it just become drastic change which is not fit as not all character flip like that it takes time to change character perpestives. Even she is extrovert, shy and timind but even she takes her stand, I found it very quick & not make sense. After 10 to 20, storyline is good and there were conversation and some scene of them but I cant relate to them to much because from earlier chapter I cant feel any connection with them. I hope you are understanding my point. I didnot write this to demotivate you but telling u want I feel while reading chapter. 

Blazeeread

@elenatheyalvor I'll edit the first 10 chapters again, don't worry. Actually getting an honest review is all that I wanted. I'll take your feedback into account and make changes accordingly. I'll try to show more inner monologues for more clarity of thoughts. I can't show more conversations between Sejal and rishabh in the beginning as their contract has been made on those terms itself, that they won't interfere and engage when they are in private. I wanted to show it seamlessly that they do try to interact unknowingly, like going to the restaurant and also their flirting. I have edited chapter 2,3 and 4 today itself. Added more scenes for clarity. 
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