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So I’ve been thinking of how this Elements Collide rewrite will go, and I think I’ve found a pretty good solution to this whole thing: Simplification.
The biggest problem with the old books (in my opinion) was how convoluted it was for no apparent reason, and having far too many characters that didn’t get the attention I wanted to give them within a reasonable amount of chapters.
How am I going to fix this, you may ask?
I am going to be cutting out 32 of the original characters. The OC count will be going from a ridiculous 49, to a more compact but reasonable 17.
Don’t worry, the primary OCs for both @korbinservergundam and @Shadow_an_Umbreon will remain intact. The majority of OCs that are disappearing are those created by me that got little to no attention.
I think this is a vital step in me regaining my motivation and making the story less convoluted, so hopefully now everyone can have a less confusing time while reading it.
oh yeah I’m also cutting out that “Spyro and Cynder are brother and sister” bullshit from the second book that was weird and awkward i dk t know what was wrong with me