So I have read “More to Life” and I recommend concentrating on 1 story at a time. Many authors I (maybe other readers) dislike, make a story with only 1-4 chapters, then abandon it by making another with 1-4 chapters.
Also if you are going to rework “More to Life”, I suggest plan out your ideas, by making lines, and proofread your work before you post it. Not many authors don’t proofread, and it makes it harder for readers to read or know whats going on. Anyway thats all I have to say, and I hope this help on your writing skills.