If it's ok with you, I want to leave some constructive criticism (you can ignore if you want, and if you want to reply just @ me)
The details in the book: Wifey's Wild Escape is good but maybe a tad bit too wordy. The story is very interesting and very rarely do authors capture readers within the first couple of sentences and you managed to do that. I loved the fact that you added an audio/song maybe do something for each chapter or so and add a line with bold font to let readers know when to start the song/audio. Your writing is remarkable but for me personally the story was a little confusing. Who are the main characters, what is the plot and point of the story, who is the love interests; Nico and Selene, Nico and Rinley or Nico and Rinley's Mom? I was just a little confuzzled. Otherwise please update your story, it was really intriguing.
