zanbaqalma

 50 Forbidden Love Stories. 50 Unforgettable Encounters. 
          
          Some desires should remain untouched… but what if you couldn’t resist?
          
          Welcome to "Desire’s Fire," a collection of 50 sinfully tempting short stories that explore forbidden love, passion, and the thrill of the unknown. From boss-secretary affairs to runaway brides, secret rendezvous, and dangerous liaisons, each chapter delivers an electrifying escape into the world of desire and temptation.
          
          What to expect?
           Scandalous affairs & dangerous obsessions
           Sinful encounters with strangers, rivals, and lovers from the past
           Powerful chemistry, explosive tension, and untamed passion
           Short, steamy stories that will leave you breathless
          
           Dare to step into the fire? 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/389821073?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=zanbaqalma
           #DesiresFire #ForbiddenLove #SpicyReads #DarkRomance #SmuttyShortStories #IndulgeYourFantasies

GIAROLL

If it's ok with you, I want to leave some constructive criticism (you can ignore if you want, and if you want to reply just @ me)
          The details in the book: Wifey's Wild Escape is good but maybe a tad bit too wordy. The story is very interesting and very rarely do authors capture readers within the first couple of sentences and you managed to do that. I loved the fact that you added an audio/song maybe do something for each chapter or so and add a line with bold font to let readers know when to start the song/audio. Your writing is remarkable but for me personally the story was a little confusing. Who are the main characters, what is the plot and point of the story, who is the love interests; Nico and Selene, Nico and Rinley or Nico and Rinley's Mom? I was just a little confuzzled. Otherwise please update your story, it was really intriguing.

GIAROLL

You're a really good writer and thank you for responding, not many of the authors here respond to the chats or feedbacks!
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Blindauthor62

@GIAROLL  I agree I messed up with the names, I called her clare in one section of the story and selene in other cause I wrote them on 2 different days and comepletey forgot to change it ones I merged the chapter together, now I fixed it and the story makes a lot more sense, thank you so much! :)
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Blindauthor62

@GIAROLL And btw, Rinley's mom = Selene
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daintydreamer456

WARNING: This story will keep you up all night.
          Prepare for a wild ride..
          The twists will leave you breathless...
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/374281685?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=daintydreamer456

Blindauthor62

I'll read it..can you read my story too please..its on my profile and I only wrote 2 stories yet..
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