Blindlovers96

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Drive you insane
          	
          	There's two readers who seem to have a problem with it. They think what happened to YN was unfair specially how she forgave the male lead at the end. 
          	First of all if you are going to favor one protagonist over another I am sorry I can't help you in that. Author has to keep both of them in mind and I can't deal with your personal choices. 
          	What YN went through was wrong but why Jungkook's suffering is considered a small burn? Because it was not described in detail? He dedicated his whole life to work after losing his father and he lost all of that. He then lost his only family left behind - his mother. He was the kindest soul and was respected so much due to that in his company. He lost all of that and everything that was done to YN was a result of her own doings. 
          	
          	Second of all they considered I romanticised abuse and rape . Which in itself is wrong. They have clearly missed the plot, it was clearly shown how mentally ill the female lead was and as sick as it was she enjoyed everytime he forced himself on her so rape is out of the book since consent was included. Before you mention it was sick of her to enjoy that and it's exactly what romanticising it then again let me repeat that "she was mentally ill stable."
          	
          	They both paid for things. Both of them suffered mentally and physically but just because one's pain was described in detail doesn't mean it reduces the other's story to ashes.
          	
          	Remember the most important point. What YN went through was the fruit of her own fault but what Jungkook went through was something he was deceived in to. He was an innocent soul dragged in this mess. You have a problem That YN forgave him and his abuse? Why don't you have a problem that Jungkook accepted her regardless of the fact he lost his mother and his everything in the journey?

Zoyafalak09

@Blindlovers96 vry well said the people who said tht y/n did wrong by forgiving him are the most immature one if ur reading a story u shld understand the both parties equally atleast...
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shesdarnanonymous

@Blindlovers96 actually, I only read a few chapters initially of your book, and I instantly understood that it wasn't Jungkook who was the only one in the wrong. He was taking revenge. While Yn brought everything upon herself, not saying that anybody deserves abuse or anything, but she wasn't one of the holiest deities either, so your storyline and everything actually make sense. I don't know who believes that it was only YN who suffered, when she clearly enjoyed whatever JJK was doing to her. She was sick, really, otherwise no sane person would have even thought of doing the things she did. Don't worry, author. Some people just can't take their own protagonists to have negative aspects and ignore all their bad deeds to keep them in a good light. I totally get what you mean, here.
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Blindlovers96

@Blindlovers96 Last of all - they said I was a child who was influencing others but all they did was curse curse and yelled. Surely, I see who is the mature one here. If it's your way of showing how much of an adult you are by cursing and barking your way through things then sure enough we can tell who is having the bigger influence here.
          	  
          	  If you can not maintain respect you will be blocked simply. Specially over your own fault when you clearly missed the whole plot. The book held a lesson in itself. About mental suffering and illness. But some people really can't look deeper in to things and all they see is what is reflected on the surface.
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pragkookify

Sorry for posting this on your board without permission, I just wanted to share this story here. Hope you don’t mind.
          
          When a billionaire addicted to pleasure gets addicted to the innocent caretaker of his personal library… their worlds collide in ways they never expected.
          
          Jeon Jungkook is a self-made billionaire, the powerful CEO of Jeon Enterprise. He has everything in life except peace.
          Kang Yn is an orphan who grew up fighting for survival. With nothing but her scholarship and determination, she finds peace in her simple life.
          
          But what happens when her peace is shaken by the storm that is Jungkook?
          
          “She was the silence he never knew he needed. He was the storm she was never prepared for.”
          
          If you love intense romance mixed with pain, passion, and fate pulling two opposites together, this is a story you’ll want to dive into.
          
          
          
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/395504368?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=pragkookify

sophoveskoo

I read your response to another user about she's my nightmare and I'm sorry but I don't think jungkook did anything with Maya that gaved the "relationships are not always rainbows and roses" message. All he did was be a gentleman

moon_simran4567

Hello everyone...
          
          Sorry to post here but being a new author i don't know how to reach more readers so hope u all will support... check the story once... So just read it and you will know...
          
          Book: He is not mine I'm his
          Author: @moon_simran4567
          
          ♡Tropes
          
          Slow romance
          Villain love: touch and die
          Marriage of convenience
          Mafia x Doctor
          She fell first
          
          
          Twists and turns that will leave you breathless..
          Heart-wrenching moments that will make you cry... Triumphant victories that will make you cheer
          
                                                             ~simran
          
          
          Link:https://www.wattpad.com/story/368905399?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=moon_simran4567